When it came I was very upset to find it seemed copyed and pasted from my orieingal textedit document i send them. I thought the resume looked okay but it doesn't suit me unless I am going to work in an office NO THIANKS!
I started thinking about it and realized there are really only two reasons they did this. One is they were impressed with my original work and just made some small changes. The other is they aren't professionals at all, I am growing very scepticle of frauds these days but I am a very forgiving person so I didn't want to jump the conclusions on this. But either way it isn't worth the full price I paid for it so I write them a brief response that may end up getting me the job I am looking for if it goes well. I wanted to share it here in case you are in a similar situation and need help frasing an email to the people you are sending it to.
Dear company,
I am Peter Bear, from the online blog PETER BEAR"S DEN (http://www.peterbearsden.blogspot.com). I recently submit an order to your website and it looked like things were fine and legit but I received a resume back from your professional writers that was not up to a standard I was expecting. I might call it unprofessional but I think there me be two reasons for this. Maybe you do not hire professional writers and your site is not run like a proper business should be run. If this is true I hope you will refund my money and I will leave you alone and not tell anyone bad reviews to avoid your site but I would advise you take it down to prevent more problems in the future.
The other option is I think maybe I under estimate my resume skills since i am now to it and maybe i created a great resume to start with so you just had to work on the format. This is a great possibility for both uf os. I am looking for work as a writer and you are a professional service. Maybe the best option is that this be counted as my application and you hire me to keep working for you. I think $50 per resume is a good amount to get paid and I would like to be part of that business.
Let us talk soon and arrange a time to talk.
Sinecerely,
Peter Bear, Writer
Let me know if this helps you do what you need for your emails!
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